Did you mean "KnightMares" instead of "KinghtMares"? (notice the swap of the letters "i" and "n")
Did you mean "KnightMares" instead of "KinghtMares"? (notice the swap of the letters "i" and "n")
its the same spelling .. ?
This reminds me of The Glitch Mob. Well done! :)
Thank you. : )
M hm, I can clearly hear and see the space potatoe passing over me while I'm listening at this. Thanks for pointing it out.
I don't hear this quality frequently on NG! Real freakin' good stuff.
The last drop was insane (wasn't expecting the "f*ck!" sample and what came next xD).
I know this isn't my business, but I can't help it: I think you shouldn't say "not a nice one" as the first thing people will read. As a listener, I tend to expect the song to be of low quality when I see that in the description. I should not be the only one with this impression (and generally, the expectations of people are their reality :P).
By the way, the same structure appears to be used in this song and the previous one you posted. This is simply a suggestion: you could try to use unorthodox structures. Under certain circumstances, it might even be a necessary evil >:D (I'm speculating here)
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Constructive:
The whole song is a bit repetitive. I was expecting something new through the first drop, and halving the speed by a factor of 2 might have worked perfectly if the melody was different in the drop. The melody is good, but it might not change enough through the song.
Also, I think you overused distortion on the drum in both drops. I think you should consider lowering the power a little bit.
Positive:
Otherwise, I like the design of the drop. Mixing is acceptable (this can always be improved!), and the white-noise after the drops sounds perfect to my ears. I believe the use of a new instrument for the half-speed melody (2:14.05 to 3:18.05) to be a good choice (is it violin?).
This has already been made. See: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/4%E2%80%B233%E2%80%B3
Okay, it's not the same length. Good point.
Great use of reverb. I think it lacks a bit of melody at the end.
Thanks, a fair criticism, I was just staring at it for 30 minutes with no new changes, so I exported and moved on
Really great composition! I enjoyed it all.
The background instrument that starts at around 0:29 and that ends at 00:56 might lack a small bit of reverb. More precisely, I think it would make the whole section emotionally deeper if you let the reverb last a little longer on each note. Next, at 02:34, the pace of change in the volume of the main instrument might be a bit too abrupt.
While maybe from 00:00 to 01:52 the mood doesn't change enough to me, as a whole, I think it's pretty much complete. I'm allowing myself to point at some stuff that could have been adjusted better *in my opinion*, but in the end this was interesting.
Keep it up dude :)
thanks dud
It's always funny to hear a vocaloid sing in English.
I'm not sure how this can belong to the genre of Dubstep: it feels more like Dance to me.
well... it's melodic dubstep, and the tempo is 150bpm... so..
I want to go back home. It's been so long, I don't know anymore when it is that I'm heading to. I'm so far away.
This is why I'm working on my multidimensional teleporter. I will one day go back home and recover my past; in the future.
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