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This was good. But I think it could be even better...
I would change the beginning melody if I was you. It could be better done (e.g. there could be more notes between the drum, it could vary a little more), more raffined.

In any case, you have already achieved great songs, and that your true level is way above this. Did you ever hear something like ‘‘the more you know, the more you don’t’’? I think you should be able to never stop trying new things according to that principle. For sure, anybody may need a break sometimes, and if you really need one, you should definitely take it.

So that’s what I think.

This is good. This is really good. I really like from 01:25 to 01:50!

Well, MDK next gen: here you are :D

Wow, great work there!

I think you can still improve this. For example, I think the volume of the "hayy~" voice in the drops (between almost each 1st and 2nd time) is too high. I would put it more in background and fade it with the high pas filter. Also, the high pass filter at 01:43 is a little bit simple, and may pass (no, there's no pun here -_-), but it could be thought and worked harder on my opinion.

Beside these negative but constructive comments (I hope), I think your stuff deserves more attention.
Keep it up!

L-Mity responds:

Thank you for your good feedback!
It looks like a lot to fix in this song...
;-;

I really like your weird high frequ drum... it's inside my ears... haw did you do dis ?_?
I like it.

On another hand, I think the synths lack reverb. You really should try to add some reverb, even just a little bit. It would give more power to your atmosphere and more presence to your instruments. Also, I think the end could have been made... in a different manner (but that's subjective :P).

In genereal, I like the melodies you put there. That makes me think it is overall a really great song.
Keep it up, buddy!

OmgMuSiCFTW responds:

Thanks Man i appreiciate the honest opinion. its been a couple years since i have made a song and uploaded it but ill keep that in mind next time! as far as the drums i used a high pass filter and as far as the ringing in the ears i like to make the hi hats and some kicks edited with a stereo shaper so it basically bounces back in forth Left to Right multiple times a second. makes a cool effect.

im just about to upload another track i spent the last couple days on let me know what you think and please give honest opinions. i find them more beneficial than anything

You definitely should try making 3/4 drops. It would be amaizing 0_0

great song! The void right before each 3rd and 4th time of the drop makes the thing freakin great 0_0
keep it up!

This one is a forking success! :O
The drops are awsome! >_<
Everything is perfect :D
Geemee more of that kind 0_0

Woah! Pretty good song! I really love from 01:36 to 02:25.

I don't know why, I just got lost from 00:30 to 00:59. wut hapnd? (That's only my fault I think xD)
The snare at 2:58 ends to fast for me. A longer transition or a weaker punch would have been great, I think. And at 01:55, the main instrument has too much distortion... The sound was too agressive to my ears.

Anything else is perfect.
Can't wait for your next song! :D

dj-Nate responds:

Thanks for the constructive review, really appreciate that!

Great spicy house thing!

I personnaly find the volume from 1:15 to ~2:00 is a bit low...
was it on purpose?

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