This was good. But I think it could be even better...
I would change the beginning melody if I was you. It could be better done (e.g. there could be more notes between the drum, it could vary a little more), more raffined.
In any case, you have already achieved great songs, and that your true level is way above this. Did you ever hear something like ‘‘the more you know, the more you don’t’’? I think you should be able to never stop trying new things according to that principle. For sure, anybody may need a break sometimes, and if you really need one, you should definitely take it.
So that’s what I think.